Selasa, 06 Mei 2014

The Effects of Eating Instant Food with Outline

Selasa, 06 Mei 2014
Di sini aku bakal kasih kalian contoh paragraph essay "cause effect". Sebenernya tulisan ini bagian dari tugas kuliahku. So, jika kalian nemuin kesalahan ditulisan ini kritik dan saran perbaikan akan saya terima dengan seneng hati. Selamat membaca :D


Outline

I.                  Introduction
A.    Indonesian people always consumption traditional food that healthy and fresh prepared   food
B.     Many people especially young people prefer to eat instant food
C.     Instant noodle as example instant food (paragraph 2)


II.                Body
A.    Cause 1     : instant noodle contain harmful substances
  Effect        : make a people slower thinking and to be stupid people and susceptible  to   disease, like cancer, damage of brain tissue, etc. (Rahmihardia Yuningtya)
B.     Cause 2     : many people have high activity and want something that simple
   Effect        : always eating instant food can make obesity. Because quantity of fat and                        sodium in the instant noodles can lead you to increase weight (Agus                                 Ratnawati)
 C.    Cause 3     : always eating instant food
   Effect        : many family loss tradition of eating and cooking together and get less                               opportunity to talk together ( Triana Widyastuti)

III.             Conclusion
· Instant food is simple and delicious but they can have serious health and social effects
· People should be smart to choose instant food carefully and not consume every day.





Nah ini paragraphnya. Selamat membaca ya..

The Effects of Eating Instant Food
In the past, Indonesian people always consumption traditional food that healthy and freshly prepared food. They also more like eat at home than anywhere else. However, in this era many people especially young people prefer to eat instant food. Today, everything foods is instant. Why many people consume instant food? Yes! Fast to be big reason.
One of all instant food is noodle. This food is very popular in the world. Many people like this instant food. Besides fast, instant noodle also have cheap price and delicious taste. However, behind the delicious taste, excessive to consume instant noodle can have serious health and negative effect.
First, instant noodle contain harmful substances. Spice in the instant noodle contains MSG (monosodium glutamate). That is dangerous substance. A doctor said, if consumes this food everyday can make slower thinking and to be stupid people. In addition, consume instant noodle everyday can makes you are susceptible to disease, like cancer, damage of brain tissue, etc.

Second, people who have high activity mostly want something that simple, including in their food. Always eating instant food like instant noodle can make you obesity. Quantity of fat and sodium in the instant noodles can lead you to increase weight in a short time.
The last, cause eating instant food many family loss tradition of eating and cooking together. They don’t have time to find ingredients and prepare, so thus get less opportunity to talk. That all make togetherness is reduced.
In the conclusion, although instant food is simple and delicious, they can have serious health and social effects. People should be smart to choose instant food carefully and not consume every day.

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